I think you did okay your grading seemed accurate, but still a good job overall. I think you just need to focus on language like me.
Cameron: - Need thesis/end result- Watch tone- a bit too casual: "stuff", "kinda"- Think about effect on the text, not just effect on the reader- Think about HOW Ishiguro is doing what you say he's doing- Need conclusion
I think you did okay your grading seemed accurate, but still a good job overall. I think you just need to focus on language like me.
ReplyDeleteCameron:
ReplyDelete- Need thesis/end result
- Watch tone- a bit too casual: "stuff", "kinda"
- Think about effect on the text, not just effect on the reader
- Think about HOW Ishiguro is doing what you say he's doing
- Need conclusion